Forums Scripts & Popups Why is this not working?

It doesnt read the first one.
And thanks for the bracket advice. missed it.

[edit]Typo :S[/edit]
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Do I need a bracket in the 2nd one if I have an If command eating all that code?
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Also tried to put all the code in one on text. Had no luck. Its not reading the first one.[/Edit]